Color it! I would love to see it colored quite frankly.
It's a strange and silly addiction but I am embracing it! Although I'm still trying to figure out how to explain to people that no, I've never played the games and don't particularly want to, but my friend writes this awesome fanfiction that totally pulls you in
You know, I think if you become a tie-in writer you will end up drawing people to the franchise you're writing about just through the sheer quality of your writing. People will recommend your work to their friends by saying things like "Even if you've never played the game/seen the movie, read this novel!!"
Thank you! I used some of your art as reference, as well as some fan art people have done for you. I was actually debating on whether or not to make the helmet as big as her head, but...that would have just looked silly (even for a chibi), so I decide to keep it in proportion to her body instead.